Facts and Fiction
By Scott O’Connor,
Author of Untouchable
Recently, I wrapped up a book tour in support of my novel Untouchable. It was the first time I’d done anything like this (written a novel, gone on a book tour) so everything was new to me — strange and exciting and a little scary. I quickly found that my favorite part of any reading was when a few hands would go up from the people who’d been kind enough to come listen to and talk about the book. At every stop, there were things asked that I’d never really considered, at least consciously — questions that made me see a book I thought I knew as intimately as possible in a whole new light. And at every stop there were a few repeat questions, nuts-and-bolts inquiries about writing, about training and process, and, most of all, research.
David Darby, one of the main characters in Untouchable, works as a trauma-site cleanup technician. If that’s an occupation you’re unfamiliar with, I’ll save you a potentially harrowing Google search and just say that trauma-site techs are the men and women who show up when someone has died, usually by violent means, and clean up what’s left after the body has been taken away. There wasn’t a stop on the tour where someone didn’t ask what sort of research I’d done into Darby’s job. The answer, though, is slightly more complicated than the questioner might have expected.
The answer is A lot, and the answer is None.
I’d always thought research was a cut-and-dried operation, a search for facts to be used in the service of creating a realistic story, but my process while writing Untouchable was not at all what I’d expected. It involved a great deal of subjectivity rather than objectivity, and it involved some difficult decisions on when to choose fiction over fact.
Here’s what I learned:
Research can be dangerous. I can easily spend a month of workdays lost in libraries and used bookshops gathering material, and then another few months reading and note-taking, with said notes leading to other avenues of interest and more days in libraries and bookstores, etc., etc. You can see where this is heading. My knowledge of a particularly esoteric subject may grow exponentially, but no actual novel writing is getting done. In fact, Untouchable began as a side-project while I was neck-deep in research for another novel I thought I was writing. It’s easy to get lost in a subject you’ve become interested in (or obsessed with) and even easier to find yourself so far down the research rabbit hole that it’s nearly impossible to climb out.
Make it up in a first draft. In the beginning, I knew the broad strokes of the techs’ jobs, and that was all I really needed to get going. The rest of it was intuitive. In each scene involving a cleanup, I tried to follow a logical sequence of events that would help them get the job done. Along the way I invented procedures and techniques (or so I thought), eventually constructing an entire occupational philosophy and code of conduct that helped inform Darby’s character and the emotional struggle the book revolves around.
Then do your research. After that first draft, I delved into the research, careful to set a time limit for how long I would be away from the actual writing of the book. During those weeks, I corresponded with a terrifically helpful source, read most of the books and articles on the field available at the time, and watched hours of fascinating but thoroughly unpleasant training videos. Maybe the most remarkable thing (apart from those videos) was how close to the truth I’d been with what I’d made up in my first two drafts. I’d gotten a lot of it wrong, sure, but I’d gotten a lot of it right just by making semi-educated guesses, and that method kept me writing rather than getting lost in the world of research.
So now I had my drafts with their created details, and I had my notes with their facts. It was time for the last, and most important, step.
Choosing fact or fiction. Before I started writing the novel, I wouldn’t have thought this step existed. Facts are facts, right? Well, actually, no they aren’t, not when you’re talking about fiction. Facts can lend an air of authenticity, they can open up insights about characters, they can point you in story directions you wouldn’t have considered before. But they can also get in your way. And so when a fact contradicted a fiction I’d created, I had a choice to make. Often, I went with the fact. The real-world truth was just too interesting to ignore. But sometimes I went with the fiction. The emotional–rather than the physical–mess that’s left after death was really the subject of the book, so it was more important that the particulars of Darby’s job feel real, just like the Los Angeles neighborhoods in which the book takes place had to feel real, though you’d be hard pressed to follow along on any map. And feeling real within the world of the book was sometimes different than actually being real in the world outside. So at these points, for reasons of character or story or mood, I made the decision to go with the fiction over the fact.
Now this approach wouldn’t work if you were writing a novel where the absolute verisimilitude of real world details is crucial to the integrity of the story. But with Untouchable, I was writing, at its heart, a book about a family fighting for its life, and David Darby’s occupation was just one part of that story. I’m sure a real-life trauma site tech could find incorrect details in any of my cleanup scenes. After all my research, I can find incorrect details in those scenes. But that would be beside the point. The world of the book is not the world of the reader or the real-life techs–not quite. It’s the world of the characters. It’s David Darby’s world, and unfortunately there’s no map to help him find his way through it.
© 2011 Scott O’Connor, author of Untouchable
Author Bio
Scott O’Connor, author of Untouchable, was born in Syracuse, New York. Among Wolves, his 2004 novella, about a boy who believes his parents have been replaced by imposters, was praised by the Los Angeles Times Book Review for its “crisp, take-no-prisoners style.” Untouchable is his first novel. He lives with his family in Los Angeles.
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