I pulled this up from the archives today because there is some relevance and new info to discuss. When I wrote this post back in October of last year, I blamed the editor. I’ve learned a lot and after painfully working through yet another poorly written book, I’ve decided the blame does not belong to the editor. Well, okay. Maybe they have some of the ownership, but I think the whole darn publishing system is to blame – including the writer.
The book that prompted this latest rant was written by a relatively known writer with more than 30 novels under his belt. I’ve not read anything else by the author so this one may be the exception, but somehow I don’t think so. here’s the scoop:
- He moves the entire story along though dialogue almost exclusively. I don’t have a problem with that necessarily but I think a balance of narrative and dialogue works best.
- His dialogue rings hollow and seems stilted and untrue. I could overlook moving the story with just dialogue if the conversations had some kind of substance. Part of the problem is that it makes any foreshadowing stick out like a sore thumb.
With that said, I’ll let you folks get back to the original post:
As a writer, I also read. That’s what writers do. I mean, besides the whole writing thing
I ordered up some books from the Mystery Guild Book Club to replenish my reading material for what should prove to be a long, cold, dark winter. I chose the books based on little more than the one or two paragraph description. I wasn’t familiar with most of the authors but I figured that was ok. After a week or two, the ubiquitous pale orange parcel slip from my friends at the Post Office was hanging out in the ol’ mailbox.
I love books. I’m always excited to see a new batch arrive. I got this bunch home and spent a little bit of time reviewing the jackets and the first few pages, trying to decide which to delve into first.
With my first selection in hand, I cozied up in the chair and prepared my self for a good reading session. At least, I thought it would be good. I ground through the first dozen pages. The story line was ok, but the writing style, well it sucked. Much of the dialogue was done in sentence fragments. Now, I think for dialogue that’s ok, because that’s how a lot of folks talk. The problem is that it was peppered throughout the narrative as well. And I don’t mean a light peppering either. Darn near every paragraph had a non-sensicle fragment.
That’s cute and effective if used a few times throughout the book, but it was apparent in this case that it was part of the style. Frankly, it did more than just irritate me. It pissed me off. How could an editor believe for an instant that this was acceptable for publication? The style is so distracting that the story line is lost.
I’ve put the book up on the shelf and I have no intention of opening it again.
That got me thinking about social norms and book reading. How many of you have slugged your way through the first chapter of a book and then just walked away? I’ll bet most of you have. Library books don’t count because you’ve no vested interest. Now, how many of you have ever walked out of a movie theater ’cause it was terrible. I’ll bet if you looked at the ratio, you’ve suffered through a lot more movies then you have books.
Why is that, I wonder? Is it because it’s considered rude to walk out of a movie theater? Maybe. After all, ditching a book can be done under the cover of night, when no one is watching.
So that’s my query to you. Do you book ditch? If so, what makes you give up?
Oh, and I don’t want to slam the book I just tromped all over in public, but if you’d like the author/title then just comment or shoot the moose an email. (I can’t believe I just wrote, “shoot the moose”)










