16 comments on “Flash Fiction Chapter – Orb

  1. Go for more on this, George. It is a fascinating premise, beautifully written as beautiful, but you really leave the reader (at least this reader) wanting to hear more about what comes next. If you ask me, this is a novel.

    Great job, as usual.

    Clarisa
    .-= Clarisa Brown´s last blog ..It Really IS a Wonderful Life =-.

    • Alex,

      Oh, but you do have a way of making me smile…

      Buddha? Heck, those photos of me in the clothing-optional yoga class were supposed to be pulled off the net by now!

      Cheers, ya nut.

      George

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  3. Hello, me Haggis Brother!

    Ahh, George, ye hae the makins a somethin wonderful here!

    None of your posters seemed to pick up on the translation of the cryptic Latin upon the orb and its tie-in with the Scottish Freemasons of the late 16th century. Your forebears.

    Did I just then detect a wink in yer eye, mate?

    Wayne C. Long
    Writer/Editor/Digital Publisher
    http://www.LongShortStories.com
    Where the Short Story LIVES!

  4. Well done! I’m a member of a flash fiction writing community and your story would fit right in.

    And if you wanted to make it a longer story, that would be great. But as a flash piece, it works just the way it is. :)
    .-= Marisa Birns´s last blog ..Saying Goodbye to Zoey =-.

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