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	<title>Comments for George Angus, Tumblemoose Writer</title>
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	<description>A passion for writing, a passion for books</description>
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		<title>Comment on When Grammar Gets In The Way Of Style by Larry Kunz</title>
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		<dc:creator>Larry Kunz</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 May 2012 20:08:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>OK....But your style needs to be appropriate for the audience and the context in which they&#039;ll read the piece. A state-of-the-union message should have a different style than an article in Parade magazine. You seem to be saying &quot;It&#039;s my style, and if they don&#039;t like it that&#039;s too bad.&quot; If that&#039;s what you&#039;re saying I can&#039;t agree with you.

That said, if the writing service doesn&#039;t clearly tell you what its expectations are with regard to style, then there&#039;s probably no way you&#039;ll ever satisfy them.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>OK&#8230;.But your style needs to be appropriate for the audience and the context in which they&#8217;ll read the piece. A state-of-the-union message should have a different style than an article in Parade magazine. You seem to be saying &#8220;It&#8217;s my style, and if they don&#8217;t like it that&#8217;s too bad.&#8221; If that&#8217;s what you&#8217;re saying I can&#8217;t agree with you.</p>
<p>That said, if the writing service doesn&#8217;t clearly tell you what its expectations are with regard to style, then there&#8217;s probably no way you&#8217;ll ever satisfy them.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Children&#8217;s Book Publishers &#8211; How to Wow Them With a Perfect Query Letter by Sydney website design</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sydney website design</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 May 2012 07:35:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>Comment on Children&#8217;s Book Publishers &#8211; How to Wow Them With a Perfect Query Letter by Adult Store</title>
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		<dc:creator>Adult Store</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 16 May 2012 11:32:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>Comment on When Grammar Gets In The Way Of Style by Jenny</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 May 2012 08:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi George.. This is a very important article and we should not let others bully us.. I think this is what most people need, especially the bloggers.. Thanks for this..</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi George.. This is a very important article and we should not let others bully us.. I think this is what most people need, especially the bloggers.. Thanks for this..<br />
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		<title>Comment on How To Publish Your Ebook On Amazon&#8217;s Kindle by tom george tamunosaki</title>
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		<dc:creator>tom george tamunosaki</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 13 May 2012 19:23:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>dear george, what is an html file and how do i save my ms word book as html file?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>dear george, what is an html file and how do i save my ms word book as html file?</p>
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